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Writing comes naturally to some. To others, it is a completely unnatural and uncomfortable process. The majority of business professionals out there fall somewhere in between. They consider themselves decent writers but find it a challenge to continually locate the right words and tone for their releases, newsletters, white papers and so on.

Here are 4 tips that can help experienced and novice writers alike build their skills and their confidence:

1. Scrutinize everything you write. It doesn’t matter if it’s an email or a birthday card, take your time with what you’re writing, and reread what you’ve created at least twice. Get a sense of what works and what doesn’t, and think about ways to improve. Should the content be more descriptive? Less wordy? Do you need a refresher course in some grammatical rules? Are you taking up several sentences to say the same thing, just in different ways? But don’t make it all negative. Focus on what’s good about your writing, too. Do you turn a nice phrase? Is your tone professional yet approachable? Do you feel that others will get a crystal-clear image of what your trying to say? The more you analyze your writing, the more aware you’ll be of your writing strengths and weaknesses. Then, you can capitalize on the former while minimizing the latter.

2. Read the content of others. Look at your competitors’ website and blog; reread emails sent to you by colleagues; dig out that industry newsletter from last month. Note words, phrases, sentences, paragraphs and whole articles that are well written and make an impact. Does your writing have that same power? It’s not that you want to copy someone else’s writing style; instead, you want to recognize good solid business writing and find ways to enhance your own

3. Read your writing out loud. This is a really good tool that even accomplished writers use. When you read aloud, you get a better feel for the tone of the piece. You’re also likely to catch errors like this: She is is a good friend.

4. Trust yourself. As a skilled professional, you are an authority in your field. Write with authority (but don’t be preachy), and others will admire and respect your prose.

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This is it! The opportunity for clients, potential clients, colleagues and so on to get to know your company. You want to tell them everything!

But don’t.

A home page is a teaser if you will. It gives the reader just enough information to know about a company without giving away the store. It entices them to click to other areas of the site to gather even more information. It is not a time to babble.

What does a good opening page of a website have?

1.) Contact information
2.) A brief summary of a company’s services
3.) An invitation to learn more

That’s it? That’s it!

Think of it this way: You’re at a networking event, and someone you just met asks you to describe your company. Rather than go into exhaustive detail, you provide a brief, but descriptive, look at the business. You want to offer more than, “We sell gizmos,” of course. What kind of gizmos? Why are they such good gizmos? Have your gizmos received any awards or gained national or international recognition? You want to offer the key details that will leave your new acquaintance wanting to know more or–better yet–wanting to do business with you!

Now imagine that conversation while you’re writing the opening page of your website. Keep it short, but not too short. Read and reread what you’ve written, and ask yourself, “Am I telling just enough to get people really excited about my business? Do they need a little more detail? Am I throwing too much at them all at once, and perhaps should save some information for other sections?”

Finally, make sure you’ve got that contact info on the home page. Once they’ve read how great your company is, they’re going to want to contact you.

I had a fiction writing teacher in college who used to talk about an old song with the verse, “Don’t tell me you love me, show me you love me.” This was his way of explaining to the class that it was far more effective to vividly describe scenes in a story rather than just talk about them in a matter-of-fact way.

What does this have to do with content for a company website? It’s not like you’re going to create a fictional story about someone who offers great service at a great price. But you can be descriptive about what it is your company does and what sets it apart from the rest.

Take, for example, the two paragraphs below. Which one paints a clearer picture of the company?

1.) Acme Lighting is a well respected industry leader with more than 20 years of experience. We serve seven counties, and our customers rely on us for quality, timeliness and fair prices.

2.) We’ve got bright ideas at Acme Lighting. That’s why folks from as nearby as Cleveland and as far away as Medina have been illuminated by our products and services for more than 20 years. Whether it’s a temporary light display for a sold-out concert at a community park or a lighting design solution for an exciting new company, Acme Lighting has bright ideas at a reasonable price.

The second paragraph gives you visual images of the areas that Acme Lighting serves and the types of projects the company might handle.

It’s not just about fun adjectives or catchy phrases. Telling your company’s story means providing information to readers that helps them see, feel, hear what you do and to clearly understand why you’re the one they should contact for their next project.

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Business e-newsletters seem to be popping up all over the place. Companies have found e-newsletters an economical and effective way to reach customers, potential customers and industry people. What a great opportunity to present industry news and illustrate what makes your product or service great.

If your company publishes an e-newsletter or is thinking of creating one, you might also consider a subtler approach to content, one that when properly executed, can be extremely satisfying for yourself and your target audience. We’ll call this approach “Newsletters That Make You Go ‘Hmm…’”

With this type of newsletter, the focus is actually not on your company but on ideas, books, articles or human interest stories that engage the reader. There is no sales pitch in this type of newsletter, nor is there a call to action. Instead, the content reveals the thought-provoking side of your team. It’s as if you are having lunch with a client or prospective client and saying, “Hey, look at this article I read! Tell me what you think.”

Giraffe, Inc., a talented Cleveland creative design firm, does an excellent job of producing “Newsletters That Make You Go ‘Hmm.’” The company weaves intelligent and fun stories about everything from overused marketing catch phrases to unconventional businesses or business practices. As you read through these stories, you may see a sentence or two about Giraffe’s work with a specific company, but the focus stays on the intended subject and not on Giraffe.

You can see one of Giraffe’s clever newsletters by clicking on this link:
http://idisk.mac.com/giraffesite-Public/Giraffe-NL.pdf

This type of newsletter works on two levels. First, it encourages the reader to think about the subject matter. “Hmm, I’ve never thought about marketing that way,” for example. Second, it subtly entices the reader to want to learn more about Giraffe. “Hmm, this Giraffe seems like an interesting company, and they’re not trying to blatantly sell me anything!”

Giraffe, in turn, uses its newsletters as a way of getting to know its clients and potential clients on a more personal level. “Did you read the article in our last newsletter? What do you think about it?” a Giraffe team member may ask during a business phone call. It helps customers see Giraffe as a group of talented people and not just a company looking for business. Of course, as with any business, Giraffe wants to attract customers! But through it’s newsletters, it seeks to inform first and then lure in new business by gaining trust and communication.

So why aren’t you writing a “Newsletter That Makes You Go ‘Hmm’” right now?

One of my daughter’s favorite commercials during the recent Summer Olympics had a catchy refrain that she happily sang long after the music had stopped. “This is Budweiser. This is beer,” the voices rang out from the television set. My daughter chimed in every time the commercial ran.

Budweiser may very well have picked up a new patron 13 years from now (much to my chagrin). The point is that the song accompanying this commercial was simple and succinct. “We make beer, and it’s good” was the gist, and my daughter, probably without knowing it, got the message. She may not have been the company’s target audience, but chances are many people of legal age also enjoyed the jingle.

To capture the attention of visitors to a company website, the content must “sing.” That doesn’t mean you have to employ trite slogans. Rather, your website content should be easy to understand, concise and engaging.

How can you make this happen? Here are some ideas:

A.) Use headlines and taglines that grab readers’ interest.
Which headline would entice you to read the history of a small business?
A History of the Joe Blow Acme Company
Joes Blow Acme Company: Lights, Camera, Action
The second headline draws you in because it creates an image of a company on the move. Think about writing headlines and taglines for your content that encourage visitors to read on. What makes your business unique? Find a couple of key words to sum that up, and use them in an attention-grabbing headline.

B.) Don’t tell the whole story.
This can be difficult, especially when you’re really proud of your company’s products or services!

Imagine turning on the radio in your car and hearing the tail end of a song that has a great tune and lyrics. It’s the first time you’ve ever heard the song, and you want to hear more. Thus, you go in search of the song on another station or on the Internet.

Think of web content as a concise–but not complete–overview of your business. Offer important details about who you are, what you can do for customers and why you do it better than anyone else. Make it interesting, and leave them wanting more. If they like what they read on the site, they’ll contact you to hear the rest of the story.

C.) Keep the copy flowing.
Remember reading a school text book that seemed to drone on from page 1 to page 599? The paragraphs were long, the sentences within the paragraphs were long, the words within the sentences were long, and after awhile you either fell asleep or became frustrated because you were unable to grasp the subject matter.

Even if your business is very technical, it’s important to keep the website content interesting and engaging. Use technical jargon when appropriate, and offer easy-to-understand definitions if you feel they’re necessary. If you’re target audience is non-technical people, try to use “layman’s” terms.

Shorter sentences are easier to follow than longer ones. A former editor of mine hammered into my head that a sentence should never be more than about 25 words long. That doesn’t mean you have to count every word, or keep every sentence at 25 words or less. (You’ll see that I broke the rule more than once within this post!) But if you reread a sentence and find yourself losing your place, you can be sure viewers of your website will do so as well.

Try to keep paragraphs between 3 and 5 sentences long. Any longer, and the readers eyes–and attention–will start to wander.

D.) Use pull quotes with meaning.
Take a really special quote from a satisfied customer and show it off somewhere on your company’s home page. (Of course, giving proper credit!) Or borrow quotes (again, giving proper credit!) from famous people in history to inspire visitors to your website.

E.) Be creative when appropriate.
Some company websites demand straightforward, serious content, but many times a website can accommodate a little creativity or levity. Why not add some oomph to your company’s history? For example:
“On a bone-chilling January night in 2003, two young entrepreneurs sat at a dimly lit table in a neighborhood coffee shop and fantasized about how they would revolutionize their industry.”

You can also be creative on an About Us page. Include interesting or little-known facts about your employees; e.g., what clubs they belonged to in high school, any sports trophies they won, their idea of a dream vacation. By including tidbits that don’t directly relate to the business, you’re revealing a human side to the company. And people (i.e., potential customers) like relating to other people.

These are just a few suggestions to help your website sing, and to get visitors to “hum” your catchy “tune” long after they’ve left your site. Now, let’s hear from you. How do you make your web content sing? What tricks of the trade do you enjoy on others’ sites. Let’s share.